joebello75 Posted December 10 Report Share Posted December 10 WE WENT THERE SAT AND IT WAS HORRIBLE AFTER WE PAID 30 BUCKS WE GOT STRIPPED SEARCHED AND THEN THE MAIN ROOM WAS LIGHT WERE THE HELL IS EVERYONE!!!! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
brooklynkid Posted December 10 Report Share Posted December 10 Q. What is a run-on sentence?A.: A run-on sentence is an ungrammatical construction in which two or more independent clauses are improperly joined without a conjunction or appropriate punctuation. When a sentence contains several subjects and verb combinations causing the reader to read on and on, that sentence is called a run-on sentence. The effect is that the reader loses the main idea of the sentence. Example: "He doesn't need me he just calls to make himself feel better." Here you could use a semicolon: "He doesn't need me; he just calls to make himself feel better." Another example: "I went to the store I was out of bananas." Here you could either use a semicolon or a conjunction, such as because: "I went to the store because I was out of bananas." Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
rocksteadyct Posted December 10 Report Share Posted December 10 Originally posted by joebello75 WE WENT THERE SAT AND IT WAS HORRIBLE AFTER WE PAID 30 BUCKS WE GOT STRIPPED SEARCHED AND THEN THE MAIN ROOM WAS LIGHT WERE THE HELL IS EVERYONE!!!! I didnt know albert einstein was on clubplanet! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
perns2002 Posted December 10 Report Share Posted December 10 what's with everyone hating on cap locks...........?Exit sucked is def. not a huge suprise, your lucky you only paid 30 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Twilo Beauty Posted December 10 Report Share Posted December 10 Originally posted by brooklynkid Q. What is a run-on sentence?A.: A run-on sentence is an ungrammatical construction in which two or more independent clauses are improperly joined without a conjunction or appropriate punctuation. When a sentence contains several subjects and verb combinations causing the reader to read on and on, that sentence is called a run-on sentence. The effect is that the reader loses the main idea of the sentence. Example: "He doesn't need me he just calls to make himself feel better." Here you could use a semicolon: "He doesn't need me; he just calls to make himself feel better." Another example: "I went to the store I was out of bananas." Here you could either use a semicolon or a conjunction, such as because: "I went to the store because I was out of bananas." Brooklyn Kid Needs to get a life and practice his spinning. You have WAY to much time on your hands. -iliana Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
brooklynkid Posted December 10 Report Share Posted December 10 Originally posted by iliana Brooklyn Kid Needs to get a life and practice his spinning. You have WAY to much time on your hands. Who the hell let this girl out of her cage? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hotcheme Posted December 10 Report Share Posted December 10 Originally posted by brooklynkid Who the hell let this girl out of her cage? idk - want ot help me put her back in? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
brooklynkid Posted December 10 Report Share Posted December 10 Originally posted by hotcheme idk - want ot help me put her back in? Please do. You'd be doing us all a huge favor. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Twilo Beauty Posted December 10 Report Share Posted December 10 Originally posted by brooklynkid Who the hell let this girl out of her cage? I had to give the cage back to your beast of a mom....Would you like to analyze my sentence lowlife?-iliana Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
brooklynkid Posted December 10 Report Share Posted December 10 Originally posted by iliana I had to give the cage back to your beast of a mom....Would you like to analyze my sentence lowlife? You try to hurt my feelings and it makes me sad.BTW, in sentence #1 there's an unnecessary use of ellipses and in sentence #2 there should really be a comma between "sentence" and "lowlife". Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
pookie23 Posted December 10 Report Share Posted December 10 Originally posted by iliana I had to give the cage back to your beast of a mom....Would you like to analyze my sentence lowlife?-iliana :laugh: Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Twilo Beauty Posted December 10 Report Share Posted December 10 Originally posted by brooklynkid You try to hurt my feelings and it makes me sad.BTW, in sentence #1 there's an unnecessary use of ellipses and in sentence #2 there should really be a comma between "sentence" and "lowlife". HAHHA Hurt your feelings? It doesn't take me to hurt your feelings. All you have to do is look in the mirror and I guarantee you'll be one real sad puppy. -iliana Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
acura Posted December 10 Report Share Posted December 10 Originally posted by brooklynkid Q. What is a run-on sentence?A.: A run-on sentence is an ungrammatical construction in which two or more independent clauses are improperly joined without a conjunction or appropriate punctuation. When a sentence contains several subjects and verb combinations causing the reader to read on and on, that sentence is called a run-on sentence. The effect is that the reader loses the main idea of the sentence. Example: "He doesn't need me he just calls to make himself feel better." Here you could use a semicolon: "He doesn't need me; he just calls to make himself feel better." Another example: "I went to the store I was out of bananas." Here you could either use a semicolon or a conjunction, such as because: "I went to the store because I was out of bananas." I thought it was an excellent post, rock on Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hotcheme Posted December 10 Report Share Posted December 10 Originally posted by brooklynkid You try to hurt my feelings and it makes me sad.BTW, in sentence #1 there's an unnecessary use of ellipses and in sentence #2 there should really be a comma between "sentence" and "lowlife". mm and i think lowlife should be hyphenated? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
brooklynkid Posted December 10 Report Share Posted December 10 Originally posted by iliana HAHHA Hurt your feelings? It doesn't take me to hurt your feelings. All you have to do is look in the mirror and I guarantee you'll be one real sad puppy. You're right. I'm hideous. My life isn't worth living any longer. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Twilo Beauty Posted December 10 Report Share Posted December 10 Originally posted by brooklynkid You're right. I'm hideous. My life isn't worth living any longer. YOU'VE SEEN THE LIGHT JORDAN KNIGHT!!! LOL -Iliana Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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