Help our site please!! Please help!!

[hotbarsbiz]

I'm new to the clubland board, I've posted a few times in the past, I would like to know if you men & women could help me out please!!

I manage a web site hotbars were looking to improve our site to make things more attractive to our users mainly based out of Detroit Michigan, with a little business out of state.

We would like Honest opinions who we could better ourselves for our users, Please if you don't have nothing nice to say then just please don't post anything, for everyone with a creative coment Hotbars will send you a free t-shirt for helping us out!!

Wax your car with it or wear it, we would rater you were it..

Just E-mail me form the site our sign up as a new user on the message forum, thanks again for all your help & support

We respect what people on club planet think thats why were asking you for your help.

this is were you can view are new site coming next month http://hotbars.biz/mockup/

Mike

[cintron]

i'm not that big of a bar fan, but I like the site overall. very clean and simple, not hard to navigate.

might help to have perhaps a contest section, as Dave has here on CP? It could be a photo-contest. You've got "babe of the week" up, which is nice but very one-sided for people who visit the site. Caters too much to one sex. Perhaps just a general "photo of the week" ?

ah well. looks clean and legit overall. good luck

[dgmodel]

Originally posted by hotbarsbiz

I'm new to the clubland board, I've posted a few times in the past, I would like to know if you men & women could help me out please!!

I manage a web site hotbars were looking to improve our site to make things more attractive to our users mainly based out of Detroit Michigan, with a little business out of state.

We would like Honest opinions who we could better ourselves for our users, Please if you don't have nothing nice to say then just please don't post anything, for everyone with a creative coment Hotbars will send you a free t-shirt for helping us out!!

Wax your car with it or wear it, we would rater you were it..

Just E-mail me form the site our sign up as a new user on the message forum, thanks again for all your help & support

We respect what people on club planet think thats why were asking you for your help.

this is were you can view are new site coming next month http://hotbars.biz/mockup/

Mike

dont take this wrong way... but youre a dick... you stole my idea right from under my lazy ass~!...

[atomicapples]

Originally posted by dgmodel

dont take this wrong way... but youre a dick... you stole my idea right from under my lazy ass~!...

yeaps... fuck it... im going to finish it to fucking take that site down...

i like competition...

[dgmodel]

lets do it...

[hotbarsbiz]

Well, I'm sorry for stealing your idea NOT, BUT Hotbars has been around for 1 yr now were having our 1st annuel party May 29th.

Good luck to you, It's a hard F!@#!ing business, I would have to say the one thing is first to prove to everyone that you won't be hear today & gone tomorrow.

But the nice thing is we have, some very large sponsors looking to invest & chain are name & franchise, we hope by the end of the year.

Oh yeh thats the next biggest thing your sponsors & advertisers.

We also should have our nation 800 toll FREE number up by May/June at the lattest.

Thanks for all the nice comments so far.

Mike

Sorry dgmodel

Remember theres always room for one more.

[chrishaolin]

Originally posted by atomicapples

yeaps... fuck it... im going to finish it to fucking take that site down...

i like competition...

i noticed the clip in your sig.. did you see the 3 minute clip of that guy?? amazing..

[covetoys]

the concept is good, but why is the "hot list" a bunch of pictures? Makes no sense? It should be Hot Picts. or Party Picts or something related to pictures, right?

And the hottie of the week is a good idea, but not for females. And the hottie, well I've seen a better look on penut butter jars. For Michigan, she maybe a cuttie, but for New York, you go to church to meet girls like that. Try getting professional models and photographers if you are going to sponcer the "hottie of the week" yourself.

[hotbarsbiz]

I think all your points are all valid points!!

I'll be looking into them ASAP

If you want leave me your address will get a shirt out to you

A-sap!!

You can register in the message forum or send it to

Jeff@hotbars.biz

Much luv

Thanks

Mike

[atomicapples]

Originally posted by hotbarsbiz

I think all your points are all valid points!!

I'll be looking into them ASAP

If you want leave me your address will get a shirt out to you

A-sap!!

You can register in the message forum or send it to

Jeff@hotbars.biz

Much luv

Thanks

Mike

i want a shirt too~!

can i have one in xxl?

[hotbarsbiz]

No problem!!

I'll get one right out to you in Thursday mail!!

XXL is on the way!!

Thanks again for your comments & suggestions

Mike

[chrishaolin]

Originally posted by covetoys

the concept is good, but why is the "hot list" a bunch of pictures? Makes no sense? It should be Hot Picts. or Party Picts or something related to pictures, right?

And the hottie of the week is a good idea, but not for females. And the hottie, well I've seen a better look on penut butter jars. For Michigan, she maybe a cuttie, but for New York, you go to church to meet girls like that. Try getting professional models and photographers if you are going to sponcer the "hottie of the week" yourself.

exactly.. i wasnt exactly feeling most of the girls in the pictures..

[hotbarsbiz]

I know there hotter women out there people..

But these are normal everyday women me&you have a chance of meeting everyday!!

Not women you would say out of mine/your league!!

But when we get those types Hotbars won't turn them down!!

Mike

Much Luv

[chrishaolin]

Originally posted by hotbarsbiz

I know there hotter women out there people..

But these are normal everyday women me&you have a chance of meeting everyday!!

Not women you would say out of mine/your league!!

But when we get those types Hotbars won't turn them down!!

Mike

Much Luv

you need to get some freaks up in there!! girls that will do anything lol

[hotbarsbiz]

Due to the Sponsors/advertisers on Hotbars I can't show anything but soft nudity..WTF that means is crazy. They say no direct nudity, But they can be in semi see through cloths in sexy positions..like how a few are.

I guess it will have to do..plus I think myself I would rather see a women with a little bit on anyway..leaves a little to the imagination : but hey thats just me..

Sponsors are picky about shit like that!!

Come on thats not bad!!

hotbars

[chrishaolin]

Originally posted by hotbarsbiz

Due to the Sponsors/advertisers on Hotbars I can't show anything but soft nudity..WTF that means is crazy. They say no direct nudity, But they can be in semi see through cloths in sexy positions..like how a few are.

I guess it will have to do..plus I think myself I would rather see a women with a little bit on anyway..leaves a little to the imagination : but hey thats just me..

Sponsors are picky about shit like that!!

hotbars

just curious.. if you're gonna be covering the entire us or at least the hottest cities, you might want to have a few associates in each city to cover each area for you.. or something like that..

[hotbarsbiz]

In June 2003 Hotbars will be going to the Hottest cities giving the customers that can't go a taste of the night life!!

But are goal is covering all 50 sates by June 2005

are 800 toll free line comes out in June as well, letting customers call in & get info on any of the bars in are network!!

We hope to get 20-40 premium night clubs in each major city..

But yrs if your/anyone is interested hotbars will be looking for peole to cover areas we are not in yet!!

[chrishaolin]

Originally posted by hotbarsbiz

In June 2003 Hotbars will be going to the Hottest cities giving the customers that can't go a taste of the night life!!

But are goal is covering all 50 sates by June 2005

are 800 toll free line comes out in June as well, letting customers call in & get info on any of the bars in are network!!

We hope to get 20-40 premium night clubs in each major city..

But yrs if your/anyone is interested hotbars will be looking for peole to cover areas we are not in yet!!

alright sounds like you guys have a pretty organized business plan developed.. gonna take either a lot of resources or alot of frequent flyer miles to cover all that area though

[hotbarsbiz]

Resources were working on as we speak..But I said we will be looking for others out of our area to help in our goals, going to the nightclubs, taking photos.. chilling with the right people of the night clubs & getting there business.

Yeh frequent flyer miles

We will be looking for people soon in other cities to help in our quest, We went to panama in March, Were going to key West in October, Hotbars also tries to go to the Hottest parties to give people what they can expect if they ever go..

Pluse we also book reservations with Hotels if a guest would like to go into certain cities for the week/weekend to party/vacation.

Time will tell how everything takes off!!

We have a few companies looking to franchise/purchase are plans

for the night clientele.

Will see

Mike

[chrishaolin]

Originally posted by hotbarsbiz

Resources were working on as we speak..But I said we will be looking for others out of our area to help in our goals, going to the nightclubs, taking photos.. chilling with the right people of the night clubs & getting there business.

Yeh frequent flyer miles

We will be looking for people soon in other cities to help in our quest, We went to panama in March, Were going to key West in October, Hotbars also tries to go to the Hottest parties to give people what they can expect if they ever go..

Pluse we also book reservations with Hotels if a guest would like to go into certain cities for the week/weekend to party/vacation.

Time will tell how everything takes off!!

We have a few companies looking to franchise/purchase are plans

for the night clientele.

Will see

Mike

well good luck with everything

[entheogen808]

Originally posted by hotbarsbiz

In June 2003 Hotbars will be going to the Hottest cities giving the customers that can't go a taste of the night life!!

But are goal is covering all 50 sates by June 2005

are 800 toll free line comes out in June as well, letting customers call in & get info on any of the bars in are network!!

We hope to get 20-40 premium night clubs in each major city..

But yrs if your/anyone is interested hotbars will be looking for peole to cover areas we are not in yet!!

website looks good, no complaints there, but your grammar and spelling are atrocious. as a representative of the site, you should work on those things. maybe it's just me, but something like that puts me off. please take this constructively.

[hotbarsbiz]

I hate Spelling & gramer..But I know it must be done..

See what happens when your average grades in English is a D in high school, don't get me wrong, I read & write fine but when it comes to grammar & punctuation I SUCK>>>>>

Lord knows I'm working on it:confused:

Thanks so much for all the good comments so far;)

[tooblunt]

Originally posted by hotbarsbiz

I'm new to the clubland board, I've posted a few times in the past, I would like to know if you men & women could help me out please!!

I manage a web site hotbars were looking to improve our site to make things more attractive to our users mainly based out of Detroit Michigan, with a little business out of state.

We would like Honest opinions who we could better ourselves for our users, Please if you don't have nothing nice to say then just please don't post anything, for everyone with a creative coment Hotbars will send you a free t-shirt for helping us out!!

Wax your car with it or wear it, we would rater you were it..

Just E-mail me form the site our sign up as a new user on the message forum, thanks again for all your help & support

We respect what people on club planet think thats why were asking you for your help.

this is were you can view are new site coming next month http://hotbars.biz/mockup/

Mike

WHO CARES!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!