tripinchick Posted November 22 Report Share Posted November 22 This is the first time I have put these words out to ears other than my own. So please excuse my rambling, but, today is my birthday, I turn 2 dedacades plus 9 years and there is a touch of fear in that. I am not looking for criticism or approval. I am just venting and what a better place than the forum which is the most close to me. Those who are not the standard, those who cherish others beliefs, or opinions, where art, music, painting or poetry... is appreciated or at least taken seriouslyI am an Artist by trade, Not a poet. So bear with me. 3 of my works I will list, I am opoliigize for the spelling...This one is about mother natureIt's called TranquilityJUST TO LISTENIS ALL IT TAKESJUST A SECONDIT'S AN EASY ESCAPESUCH SEDUCING HARMONYMY SENSES HEARBLOWING THROUGH MY BODYCARRYING FAR ALL FEARI WILL STAY HERE FOREVER... SOMEDAYLISTENING TO HANDS THAT GENTLY CLAPON SUNLIT AMBER SANDSWHERE TRACKS WERE LEFT BYSMALL WINGED CHILDRENIN CONTENT OR AT PLAYWHERE EACH NEW HORIZON INSPIRES THE GREAT ONESWHO TRY TO PAIN THE PERFECT DAYHUMBLING THEM WITH HER FLAWLESSNEESSIS SO EASLY DONE BY HERFOR NO ONE CAN CREATE WHAT SHE HAS SO EASILY DONEMASTERPEICE COME ALIVE...SUPREMECY... PERFECTION, NATUREWHERE ALL HERE CHILDREN COME TO MEETSINGING PRAISES UNTO SHEDANCING AND PLAYING FRANTICALLYIN AND OUT OF THE ROARING AND TIMELESS SEAWHOSE APPLAUSE GROWS STONGER BY THE BREEZELISTEN, DREAM, BELIEVEFOR WITH OUT HER THERE IS NO DESTINY-----------------------------------------To be freeIs all there is All we strive for All we do not become__________________________________Summer, days so long...Trees grow emerald greenIn them birds sing their songs...Meanings remain a mysterySandy beachesAnd suntan lotionTo stay for ever I beseechBut in a stormy motion Sunny days slip out of reachBriging to us cold death And frozen breathBut not before putting up a fightDo summer take it's flightIndignant she may beSending her loved ones awayBut only to protect them from colder growing daysAnd once the fight has begun she knows that she will loose....But not before taking away all her beatiful hues.___________________________________________Excuse me for all my bad spelling for I never claimed to be an english teacher.And I know not why I have written these things to you. But I have. Take it as you maySmileRae------------------** Shake It Baby **~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ -Tchick Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jdogg Posted November 22 Report Share Posted November 22 Happy Birthday Rae!And good to have you back.------------------JDogg "Jesus Tap Dancing Christ,I've never seen anything sojuvenile in my life."- Mr. Garrison Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ibhugh Posted November 22 Report Share Posted November 22 Welcome back RaeI thought those poems were really good! Don't worry about your b-day. I just turned three decades a couple of months ago and it's not that bad.... HAPPY BIRTHDAY!!!!!Every year has the potential for new and joyous experiences.Keep on keepin' on Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kramadas Posted November 22 Report Share Posted November 22 Hey Rae, Happy B-Day!! Those peoms were great...spellings are just plain technicalities...what matters is the emotion conveyed by those poems!! ------------------Raving is a state of mind.It has nothing to do with what you wear, how old you are or how you look.Its all about the vibe! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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