funeralhome Posted November 2 Report Share Posted November 2 @ www.groovanauts.com ... i'm so excited. let me know what you think. it's on the main page; burridge review. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
someclown Posted November 2 Report Share Posted November 2 Nice job! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
stymie Posted November 2 Report Share Posted November 2 Nice article but lay off the I's next time. I this, I that... way too many. And you mentioned at the end the amount of detail you left out... you should have put that all in and left out all the boyfriend/cab/pointless stuff that had nothing to do with halloween, BED or Burridge. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
deepspell Posted November 2 Report Share Posted November 2 nice article kat but i totally disagree with you.......i thought it was a fantastic time, Lee was droppin the filth.....Less chin stroking/over analizing and more "just having fun". i used to over analize night i would go out as well, but as i've learned, the more you do it, the less times you will hae a good time when u go out although i suppose u should over analize if your going to write articles...anywhoo, great job girl! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
funeralhome Posted November 2 Author Report Share Posted November 2 Nice article but lay off the I's next time. I this, I that... way too many. And you mentioned at the end the amount of detail you left out... you should have put that all in and left out all the boyfriend/cab/pointless stuff that had nothing to do with halloween, BED or Burridge.it was a personal memoir more than a review of the regular particulars. and all that "stuff" is not pointless to me. it's what makes my night.. the anticipation, the worries, questioning and the overanalyzation is what always needs to be done otherwise how can i digest what's most important to me?i got tired towards the end i suppose. i will add in those extras next time. thanks. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
someclown Posted November 3 Report Share Posted November 3 Nice article but lay off the I's next time. I this, I that... way too many. And you mentioned at the end the amount of detail you left out... you should have put that all in and left out all the boyfriend/cab/pointless stuff that had nothing to do with halloween, BED or Burridge. Yeah, I guess I agree. Nobody really cares about your boyfriend. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
funeralhome Posted November 3 Author Report Share Posted November 3 thanks for all the support guys.. thanks thanks thanks.. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
silverbull Posted November 5 Report Share Posted November 5 a very good read girl. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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