Bling Posted September 21 Report Share Posted September 21 besides being a club freak i also write poetry. shockin but true. i have a bunch of them but a lot of them are only for close friends to see. but i can post at least one of them here. as well as the one i posted in the sex board.here ya go. id say i wrote this during my sad phase lolim much happier now thanks to a new wonderful friend The SeagullI no longer listen to the songs of birdsI no longer can enjoy the rising and setting of the sunANOTHER DAYThe days ebb and flow like the tides of the seaQuiet, unnerving, melancholicA lone sea gull cries in the night air longing for some foodIts starvingANOTHER DAYThe seasons change around me, yet my world remains the sameA world full of loneliness and deceptions.When will change come?ANOTHER DAYRomanticism lives within my heart and soul Forever trapped not of my own doing But because there are no takers.ANOTHER DAYAs the days come and go and the lonely nights alone in my bedBegin to overwhelm me I think of myself as that hungry seagull whose shrills pierced the nightsky. The seagull like myself, screaming out of hunger but not being heard. His hunger physical, mine emotional.ANOTHER DAYBut the seagull does have an advantage over me. He can fly amongst God’s breathHe can elevate himself to a plane that I can only dream. His lover is the sky. His wings wrapped in a lover’s embrace with the sun drenched sky. I on the other have my feet grounded wishing for a freedom that can only be achieved when someone unlocks my heart with the key of loveANOTHER DAY COMES TO AND END Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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Candy Posted September 21 Report Share Posted September 21 Originally posted by andrewthomas -7 Dude, u sure u got that number right? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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koky Posted September 21 Report Share Posted September 21 Originally posted by clubspaceguy besides being a club freak i also write poetry. shockin but true. i have a bunch of them but a lot of them are only for close friends to see. but i can post at least one of them here. as well as the one i posted in the sex board.here ya go. id say i wrote this during my sad phase lolim much happier now thanks to a new wonderful friend The SeagullI no longer listen to the songs of birdsI no longer can enjoy the rising and setting of the sunANOTHER DAYThe days ebb and flow like the tides of the seaQuiet, unnerving, melancholicA lone sea gull cries in the night air longing for some foodIts starvingANOTHER DAYThe seasons change around me, yet my world remains the sameA world full of loneliness and deceptions.When will change come?ANOTHER DAYRomanticism lives within my heart and soul Forever trapped not of my own doing But because there are no takers.ANOTHER DAYAs the days come and go and the lonely nights alone in my bedBegin to overwhelm me I think of myself as that hungry seagull whose shrills pierced the nightsky. The seagull like myself, screaming out of hunger but not being heard. His hunger physical, mine emotional.ANOTHER DAYBut the seagull does have an advantage over me. He can fly amongst God’s breathHe can elevate himself to a plane that I can only dream. His lover is the sky. His wings wrapped in a lover’s embrace with the sun drenched sky. I on the other have my feet grounded wishing for a freedom that can only be achieved when someone unlocks my heart with the key of loveANOTHER DAY COMES TO AND END fuckin 4get it !!! now you're gonna get all the chicks !! :mad: Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Candy Posted September 21 Report Share Posted September 21 Originally posted by clubspaceguy Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Candy Posted September 21 Report Share Posted September 21 Originally posted by koky fuckin 4get it !!! now you're gonna get all the chicks !! :mad: :laugh: :laugh: Better pick up that pen and paper and start writing huh? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
koky Posted September 21 Report Share Posted September 21 Originally posted by candyrollx69 :laugh: :laugh: Better pick up that pen and paper and start writing huh? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bling Posted September 21 Author Report Share Posted September 21 get all the chicks lol. right with my luck that wont happen. but still a nice thought though. i love to write though. best way to just get stuff off my chest Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
koky Posted September 21 Report Share Posted September 21 Originally posted by clubspaceguy get all the chicks lol. right with my luck that wont happen. but still a nice thought though. i love to write though. best way to just get stuff off my chest POEM WAS KICK ASS BTW SPACEGUY :aright: Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Orisha Posted September 21 Report Share Posted September 21 nice! sooooo. someone broke your heart? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bling Posted September 21 Author Report Share Posted September 21 nah its more like lookin to just find the right person more than a broken heart. account it to loneliness i guess Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
koky Posted September 21 Report Share Posted September 21 Originally posted by clubspaceguy nah its more like lookin to just find the right person more than a broken heart. account it to loneliness i guess Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
andrewthomas Posted September 21 Report Share Posted September 21 -6 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bling Posted September 21 Author Report Share Posted September 21 thanks for the nice comments Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fliptoniaaa Posted September 21 Report Share Posted September 21 art is art....so dont hate....................appreciate!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bling Posted September 21 Author Report Share Posted September 21 tru. if there is any consolation guys... i cant draw for shit. except maybe stick figures Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bling Posted September 21 Author Report Share Posted September 21 more stuff to come soon . Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
koky Posted September 22 Report Share Posted September 22 Originally posted by clubspaceguy more stuff to come soon . bring it !! im takin notes Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CrzyC Posted September 22 Report Share Posted September 22 Originally posted by koky bring it !! im takin notes Watch out CLUBSPACEGUY...next thing you know KOKY will be reciting YOUR poetry in the clubs!!! LOL:laugh: Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
koky Posted September 22 Report Share Posted September 22 Originally posted by CrzyC Watch out CLUBSPACEGUY...next thing you know KOKY will be reciting YOUR poetry in the clubs!!! LOL:laugh: :laugh: could you imagine that ?? :laugh: Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CrzyC Posted September 22 Report Share Posted September 22 Originally posted by koky :laugh: could you imagine that ?? :laugh: I can see it now...Poetry reading by KOKY at the next Fliptoniaa...dates and times to be announced. LOL:laugh: Just dont read any freaky shit ok, REQUIEM FOR A DREAM was enough for a few months. LOL Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
koky Posted September 22 Report Share Posted September 22 Originally posted by CrzyC I can see it now...Poetry reading by KOKY at the next Fliptoniaa...dates and times to be announced. LOL:laugh: Just dont read any freaky shit ok, REQUIEM FOR A DREAM was enough for a few months. LOL :laugh: Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bling Posted September 22 Author Report Share Posted September 22 any ladies want me to write them some poetry just message me lol Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
xxgrooveericxx Posted September 22 Report Share Posted September 22 Originally posted by diabolique007 nice! sooooo. someone broke your heart? It happens to the best of us.... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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