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Me too ;)

I have some nice poems from back in the day that get better with age.

Here's one that a special someone sent me a few dayz ago... hope it's what you're looking for~

free , wings spread, life begins, the dawning of a new day

resist the fight with all my might and dream the needle in hay

i fall alone and stand with you

like glue with no undo

zeros and tens can never depend on the love i feel for you

hats and clowns may spread their frowns, but but powers can never undo

the love i feel for you

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I have a few too that I'll check out for ya later....

In the mean time...why don't you check out some song lyrics....I know that's sort of an easy way out....but maybe if you write down the lyrics for her, and then play the song after she's read them....You can really let you know that she's the music that brings those words alive.....


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Here are 2 poems I wrote years ago...

I dont know if are appropriate...but here they are anyway...I Don't normally write Love Poems...they are a little abstract...


Oh beautiful sane goddess,

Read me my dancing thoughts,

You float with cream melting beauty,

Restraining your clothes,

And cloth me with velvet drapes

How clean you are,

In mere appearance,

As you relax in mellow thoughts,

I praise your freeness,

Like finesse silky scents swallowing your image

You are a mirror reflecting independence,

Tieing yourself back,

You run a fresh youthful single moment,

Covered in silence of trust and need

Oh Goddess you live your life,

One sea wave at a time,

Not one complain; Maybe,

You walk so freely in utter darkness,

And reflect a light to guide your way...

-Nurse Glow


Since I have left my constituted nature

I breathed once again

A life so unknown

But gained through time

A hopeful future

Thee has found

And thou will reveal

This explosive mode

Time is vital

Willing to last forever

Unneeded to be stopped

These undescripted joyous moments

Of a fine, fine rapture

For I will soon see...

-Nurse Glow

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I toss and turn in my sleep,

Spending yet another dreamless night…

Sinking into the abyss

Of my lonely battered heart….

I feel myself to drift,

And start to float away…

Reality out of reach

The picture becomes fuzzy,

And my body feels week…

Like lightning flashes,

I am awoken, In my lovers arms

Safe at last..

Feeling the warmth of his touch,

And the silky skin that enraptures him

He caresses my face, lazily

As he awakes from loves crazy stuper….

I cling to him

To this being who has made my life complete

I close my eyes, sighing from relief

As his arm is wrapped tightly around me…

As I drift off to sleep, I remember

All the ways he’s looked at me

With nothing but love in his eyes…

And I remember,

All the words he’s said to me

His heart never within disguise

And I remember,

The feel of his body, and his soul

Melting into mine….

As it gets all hazy, and I feel myself drift…

Love, my love, where are you going?

I feel you leaving…

As I re-gain strength,

Once again….My eyes flutter open…

And there is nothing but darknes…

Love, my love

You’ve fooled me once again…

Love that was love, but that has never been.

Darkness surrounds me, as I try to fight it off

….But dare I see a ray of light

Dare I say it’s a glimmer of hope

Love, my love, your not lost,

Love, my love, your just not found

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Originally posted by gmccookny

Yes, very nice:)

I feel you got the true meaning of "love" in that poem :love:

That poem was kind of a fluke....I was just putzin' around at work one day and that's what I came up with. It was actually on Valentine's Day that I wrote it too...


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I just wrote it the other night.....Randall, thanks! Lets see some of yours...:D

Lying awake.

The candles flicker.

The tensions in the air,

Growing nothing but thicker.

Allowing myself,

To slip out of my mold.

And tap into,

This heart of gold.

To the reserves of you,

And where you once lived.

To the memories of laughter,

And you...all too vivid.

I lie there still

Staring at the shadows surrounding

Allowing myself to feel these things,

THat were left behind before we found them.

I sometimes think,

To feel these things,

Is not so bad.

But then I remember,

What was there,

And what we no longer have.

No ice in my veins,

You've melted me clean.

Nothing but warmth in my heart,

Is what you've seen.

But so I move on

One foot in front of another

But knowing I'm not all there,

I'm me, undercover.


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