tinybutterfli Posted August 15 Report Share Posted August 15 i have no idea where the old one went...I was stuck on the subway for 30 minutes this morning between Rosslyn & Foggy Bottom and I wrote a haiku 'cause I was bored Ken thinks its pretty good I call it "Cold Day in Hell"Ate red m&mWashed it down with AbsolutListened to FeelgoodI think that last line might me 6 syllables Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kken Posted August 15 Report Share Posted August 15 complacency setsa boy named vic harassesvengeance shall be mine Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
revaluation Posted August 15 Report Share Posted August 15 doing fine with drinkgets substance from cranky friendmemory no more Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
teriaki Posted August 16 Report Share Posted August 16 when you're not looking vultures grind on the girlswhen dancing at 5 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
vixenfoxxy Posted August 17 Report Share Posted August 17 Can someone explain the rules please? The last time I even saw a haiku was in 10th grade english and I don't remember shit about it. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
teriaki Posted August 17 Report Share Posted August 17 Originally posted by vixenfoxxy Can someone explain the rules please? The last time I even saw a haiku was in 10th grade english and I don't remember shit about it. A haiku has 5 syllables in the first line, 7 in the 2nd, and 5 in the third (5-7-5).Technically speaking, it also has to include something about nature. I think anything that goes 5-7-5 is acceptable here. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
therunner Posted August 17 Report Share Posted August 17 My Mind is wastedFrom all these pills I tastedNature Melts Away Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
teriaki Posted August 18 Report Share Posted August 18 For the record, Tiny, I thought this would generate more than 6 posts. I'm ashamed that more people haven't written a CP haiku. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
revaluation Posted August 18 Report Share Posted August 18 Originally posted by teriaki For the record, Tiny, I thought this would generate more than 6 posts. I'm ashamed that more people haven't written a CP haiku. that is probably the worst haiku ever Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tinybutterfli Posted August 18 Author Report Share Posted August 18 Originally posted by teriaki For the record, Tiny, I thought this would generate more than 6 posts. I'm ashamed that more people haven't written a CP haiku. lol - its okay Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
eggmok Posted August 18 Report Share Posted August 18 v.i.p. we went . . .this club has an awful scent . . .save me from this hell . . . Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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