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could i please get some reviews on my first "sexy"flyer?


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the cyber flyer has been exhusted, there all over the place...

the last one "6th sense" went over well

this time i tried another approach...

b4 i launch it id like some feedback from who else??? the pro's in NYC!!

so please drop me a line or post a review so i can figure out what to do, and fix!!!!! www.djjoshuacarl.com

its on the splash page

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Fuck the flyer...

Who's the girl!!

Not bad.... not bad... that'd make people who appreciate the females... keep the flyer.. Don't know if they'd go to the club though..

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I'm rather confused as to if you wanted our comments on the PAGE or the four different flyer?

If it's the page then I think it's a lil' cluttery. The pics are very nice, but maybe it should look a little neater.

If it's on the four different flyer . . . errrr is that suppose to be one flyer??

Okay, all I can say is that the pics are nices. I like em'!!

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you asked, so I'm giving it...

I applaud the effort and energy but basically, all I see is a curvey chick in undies. I'm thinking either soft porn or victoria's secret. doesn't inspire me to boogie down. don't know if it would bring people, or at least the right people. I guess if you're going for the uptown crowd it might work. then again, I could just be biased in that I don't think half naked chicks automatically equals results. sex only sells so far and in the right way.

if you need printing, there's a place that does postcards cheap, I have the name and address at home. also, depending on how many you need you can try a service bureau like kinkos, or an offset printing place (try Gramercy Offset down near 23 and park).

hope that helps,

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i wasnt exactly expecting a huge female approval...but it was tastefully done so most women have been appreciative of that.

and we have plenty of gilrs usually come anyways. so we were shooting for the male collegiate crowd...plus im a amature.

the previous 6 flyers for this night... theyve been pretty varied...i figured id work the sex angle this time...

thanks guys....as usual

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